|Reviews for Insert Witty Title Here|
| GRiella 9/29/09 . chapter 9
To answer your question on Chinese...because 8 sounds similar to "fa" in catonese, and the word "fa" means wealthy...I think it is the same in Mandarin?..."ba" and "fa" sounds...a bit similar. But I am sure about the cantonese, coz its my first spoken language.
Good work as always, congrats for your Bday...haha...everyone says that they need to do something crazy on their bday. A fd of mine got five ear piercings...
Till next time
| May Eve 9/29/09 . chapter 9
-giggles- I love this! Especially the Harry threats when he agrees to a date. I had to reread that twice because I started laughing too hard to concentrate. Very well done, as usual! Keep up the awesome work!
| s 9/11/09 . chapter 8
please update soon this is a good story even if it is just going to be a couple chapters...
| Chimeralchy 8/31/09 . chapter 7
I really like this story! The plot is nice, and I think that you write well. I hope you'll continue this story!
| me 8/28/09 . chapter 8
awesome chapter! i LUV the bleach refrences! great descriptions too! i felt so proud that i could see it all in my head w/out reading the bottom ;P i think you did a wonderful job of matching characters and i can't wait to read more or ur story! D
| Farsi 8/16/09 . chapter 8
I don't get Kyouya's reference to Harry's cooking, could you explain that? Fantastic chapter, as usual! Loved Kyouya's reaction to Hermione's outfit and the little bit with the ever-awesome Takashi at the end. Don't give up on him, Kashi-kun!
| Inumaru12 8/10/09 . chapter 8
Lol, i knew the anime was bleach as soon as you mentioned Kyouya. XD *sigh* Mori is so stubborn, lol. I can see Harry totally getting angry b/c of that but then finally relenting and going on a date. I really like how you made Kyouya btw, XDD it just amuses me. Anyway, patiently waiting for more!
| JazzNProwl's sparklingAriaFyre 8/9/09 . chapter 8
YAY! More Mori/Harry! So happy! I love your fics they are so kawaii!
| Tori-chan 8/7/09 . chapter 8
Very... cute, and sad. And good.
I look forward to more
| 099ckr990 8/7/09 . chapter 8
...yes, i suppose that have over 100 reviews for a series of one-shots would be disconcerting...and definitely worth being the cause of a spit-take (or a near one, as is). the only thing i have to say (other than to figuratively sing your praises) is that you may wish to consider having all the segments of 'a slight alteration' formed into a separate fic, since it appears that this is going to be quite a long one...either that, or this is a plot bunny problem big enough to give the Guardian of the Cave of Caer Banu a run for its money. (ie. infamous rabbit from monty python and the holy grail...probably a good form for hani's boggart, should he ever see the movie...)
| Erroneously 8/7/09 . chapter 8
The bit about memory charms was a fascinating idea. And I love the idea of Takashi and Hani as Kenpachi and Yachiru XD
| Merme 8/7/09 . chapter 8
The fight scene with Bellatrix was great! :) And it's interesting to know that Takashi is interested in Harry, too! :) But please post the next part before September 1st! (or August 31st) I'll be unable to read it for awhile, otherwise, I'm getting my wisdom teeth taken out on the 31st and will be too out of it to do anything in the next couple of days after! D: I guess I could wait to read it...but it'd be awesome to be able to read it before hand! _ Well, no matter when you post the next part, I'm excited to see what happens next! _ Oh! And believe me, this collection of one-shots of yours deserves all those 100 reviews, and more! (lots more!) _
| MarieVerdonck 8/7/09 . chapter 8
Great chapter! Love the costumes ;) Does the fact that there are over a 100 reviews for these one-shots mean that you'll make the rest in real stories too? *puppy eyes* Anyway I can't wait for the next part so please update soon!
| 1Diane 8/5/09 . chapter 7
You're my favorite writer. Hands down
| Naramyon 8/5/09 . chapter 6
You've already two chapters for A Slight Alteration, and it's obvious that there will more. Why don't you just make it into a new/seperate story already?
...Or are you keeping it with the one-shots because it's a bit slap-stick?
But seriously, multiple chapters continuing a similar plot cannot be refered to as a 'one-shot'.
*grumbling about authors and their 'inconsistant dictionaries'*
But to conclude on a positive note: I've enjoyed A Slight Alteration, I can't wait to see what you write next.
(Hint: Mori/Harry love)