They're so utterly cute it makes me feel like I'm intruding just by reading this.

This is a very good story about Percy who I think is a misunderstood and yet well rounded character in the books. Percy takes care of the little boring details in life that make it possible - the thickness of caulder bottoms may be boring but it becomes important if your eleven year old is making a potion for the first time and a mistake will burn through leaving them scared. What I mean is you present Percy as someone real, geniune, as a believable adult who was once head boy. Your Audrey is very interesting, a serious, slightly damaged woman who didn't even know she was responding to magic when it walked in the door and yet trusted her instincts.
Your writing style is clear, thoughtful, and detailed enough to allows the reader to set the scene in their head. Well done. Thank you for sharing.

Mucho kudos, Cassie. I highly enjoyed this piece. You definitely have a gift for taking the small characters and making them everything they need to be. Audrey was fantastically crafted, and I can't stress that enough.

Your style is engaging and easy to read, and your wording is lovely. The setting, while it could have been spoiled by the sheer cliche-ness of it, was brilliant. This was an excellent piece; thank you for sharing it with us!

(Okay, so I didn't have time last night, but I'm here now! *smile*)

Lovely little story. Percy's story has always struck me as one of the saddest of the Weasley's tales... it can be hard to be so different from your family, and mistakes were made on both sides that caused the rift. You created a wonderful Audrey here to put him back together.

I wonder where the notion that Audrey is a Muggle comes from. It seems quite popular, but I haven't been able to find where Rowling said this. Ah, well, forgive my little non-sequitir. Again, this was a wonderful little vignette, and I thank you for writing it.

Nicely done! A very touching, insightful, well-written story!! :)

Oh, this is sweet and lovely and it makes me smile a whole lot.

This was a beautiful continuation of the other story. I'm even more in love with your version of this couple now. I love how she made him get back in touch with his family, his reflections on how they didn't understand each other. I love the way they grew closer, and then it all culminated on that lovely picnic. It was really amazing. Great job!

If you ever write more about these two, I'd love to read it.

AWesome story! I need more! The family! Have you written more? Should if not ;)

this is such a strong story. I never read a Percy story before but this was such an interesting take on him. and her. and their relationship. I never thought much of Percy because she enver really wrote that much about him but your take on him being the odd man out in the family. the one who didnt really undrestand the rest and wasnt understood in return, its perfect. and the way they helped each other heal... just wow. and I would love to see what she tought of the family and what the family thought of her but it is still perfect as it it even without it.

thank you

Aww, this was wonderful and very sweet. I'd love to read more about Audrey & Percy!

wow.
that was amanzing.
seriously.

Wonderful wonderful story. Bittersweet, romantic, and you've kept Percy in character.

I really like this take on Audrey and Percy's relationship, and Percy himself, actually. You're very good at reversing all the previous misconceptions I had about the characters (like with Lavender) and it's definitely in a good way.

Thanks!
~Shu

Oh, I thought this was really sweet. And lovely. x

Very cute!