 whitehound 2008-11-01 . chapter 1Very neat: you've managed to convey a lot in a little, including a lot of emotional and character detail.
By the by, my fault for reading it too fast, but I see when I was beta-ing I missed one. "Wake up me" should have been "wake me up".
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 ippogrifo 2008-11-01 . chapter 1ROFL!
Very funny and ironic. Well done.
I don’t know if SHE deserves to be treated so kindly after all she has done to Severus and all the readers. For sure a prince should be valued like a rare and precious thing instead of wasting it. As a matter of fact, I still can’t forgive her for having forced you authors to all those pathetic rescue operations Snape laments of which and yet, I will appreciate some more others. |