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XxBlackTypewriterxX
2009-06-17 . chapter 14
Great job, the story is coming together great! Keep it up!
NxT
2009-04-19 . chapter 14
PLEASE CONTINUE!!?!!?!?!?!?!!? i love it! this story is great! bye
kitten9322
2009-04-13 . chapter 14
i luv how dis chap is all mysterious nd evn tho short its informative its so cute i jus love im a bit confused at da part after she gets knocked out can u explain it to me pweez?
Itsxme83
2009-04-13 . chapter 14
update soon its really awesome
animeluver
2009-04-12 . chapter 14
please do continue!
i think the gorey bits are really cool!
Crazy Kunoichi Tenten
2009-04-11 . chapter 14
WO
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YOU UPDATED !

OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
PLEASE UPDATE AS SON AS POSSIBLE
myobsessionbitesurs
2009-04-10 . chapter 14
appreciated :)
nice! very nice! you need to update soon! and yes it is worth your time to write. :) the only criticism i have (minor) is that she says "no one has ever cared before" a lot. try having her express her shock some other way by just describing how her face looks (in total shock) or something. Other than that AWESOME now you just have to update xmen!
mangafilipina
2009-04-09 . chapter 14
I really liked the chapter. You get a lot of history on Tenten. And for when they get out of the barrier, there could be a cave in or something to get them moving.
Anonymous
2009-03-14 . chapter 13
It is now March 14. More than two weeks are over. Please update! I know you are busy, and thankyou for wanting to do your homework and study. Update!
Crazy Kunoichi Tenten
2009-03-01 . chapter 13
Please update as soon as possible i wanna no wot happens next !
kitten9322
2009-02-17 . chapter 13
i luv dis chap evn tho its short nd thx for da update bout ur update lol can u do it agen srry i onli chk ma yahoo nd dats where dese notices r seen also can u read ma story nd give me a few tips cuz i wanna do a gud job on it since its ma 1st if u can thx nd if u cnt its ok well keep it up!
Serene Cerulean
2009-02-14 . chapter 13
thanks for updating
cant wait for the next chapter
Nightraze
2009-01-15 . chapter 12
Love it. Update ASAP. (i think im going to add this to my favourits)
naash
2009-01-11 . chapter 3
ok lol for a second thought i thought it was orochimaru :) oh well good thing that it isnt
Serene Cerulean
2009-01-09 . chapter 12
how could u leave it that
any way great chapter
plz update soon
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