Great job, the story is coming together great! Keep it up!

PLEASE CONTINUE!!?!!?!?!?!?!!? i love it! this story is great! bye

i luv how dis chap is all mysterious nd evn tho short its informative its so cute i jus love im a bit confused at da part after she gets knocked out can u explain it to me pweez?

update soon its really awesome

please do continue!
i think the gorey bits are really cool!

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YOU UPDATED !

OMG I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!
PLEASE UPDATE AS SON AS POSSIBLE

appreciated :)
nice! very nice! you need to update soon! and yes it is worth your time to write. :) the only criticism i have (minor) is that she says "no one has ever cared before" a lot. try having her express her shock some other way by just describing how her face looks (in total shock) or something. Other than that AWESOME now you just have to update xmen!

I really liked the chapter. You get a lot of history on Tenten. And for when they get out of the barrier, there could be a cave in or something to get them moving.

It is now March 14. More than two weeks are over. Please update! I know you are busy, and thankyou for wanting to do your homework and study. Update!

Please update as soon as possible i wanna no wot happens next !

i luv dis chap evn tho its short nd thx for da update bout ur update lol can u do it agen srry i onli chk ma yahoo nd dats where dese notices r seen also can u read ma story nd give me a few tips cuz i wanna do a gud job on it since its ma 1st if u can thx nd if u cnt its ok well keep it up!

thanks for updating
cant wait for the next chapter

Love it. Update ASAP. (i think im going to add this to my favourits)

ok lol for a second thought i thought it was orochimaru :) oh well good thing that it isnt

how could u leave it that
any way great chapter
plz update soon