 AEthereal Devastation 2009-10-14 . chapter 5Nice story. The chapters could stand to be a lot longer. Update as soon as you can, please. |
 aims5 2009-10-11 . chapter 5ohh cool!!
Aims5;) |
 ShadowWolfDagger 2009-07-07 . chapter 3Awesome PRJF story can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon ^_^
Can't wait to figure out more about Ava ;)
~Tala-Paige~ |
 aims5 2009-04-05 . chapter 3i love it so far! when will the next chapter be up?!
aims5 |
 PinkAzn 2008-11-11 . chapter 2interesting chapter, but i think you should still make an oc coupling with casey. xD idk, i guess ive gotten really into the whole casey/oc pairing since lily and theo are official in the series. :) JUST A SUGGESTION! xD |
 Blackguard 2008-11-10 . chapter 2so awesome chapter, loving the gangs reaction to Ava showing up, especially Theo's, that could lead to fun. one minor critique though, you misspelled Lily's name, only two L's not three |
 Lovely-Loser-Lori 2008-11-10 . chapter 2very interesting... =] |
 Blackguard 2008-11-09 . chapter 1very interesting start. Looking forward to how this is gonna go. great chapter *insert thumbs up here* |
 PinkAzn 2008-11-03 . chapter 1this is a pretty interesting start. i'd love to see a casey/oc story. i haven't read any of those yet and OCs are usually more interesting! cant wait to read more. |
 rangerfanforever 2008-11-02 . chapter 1good start. as for pairings... hmm lets see, how about Lily and Casey and RJ and Fran. and Theo with another Character? |
 Neo Aguni 2008-11-02 . chapter 1well you definately have me curious, and as for pairings how bout Casey/Lily Theo/Casey's sister. |
 emoprincess3587 2008-11-01 . chapter 1Hey wow this story sounds awsome so far! Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
And as for pairings...i have always been a Rasey fan myself :P
Keep up the good work!! XD |
 ChildOfDarkness1988 2008-11-01 . chapter 1Ooh, good start! This sounds like it could make a very good fanfic.
As for pairings... I'm partial to Rasey, or Rily (RJ/Casey or RJ/Lily) though Thily (Theo/Lily) isn't all that bad if you have this have Rasey...
I always felt that Casey has some sort of secret past or something... Something that would keep him up at night...
Please write more! |
 Crazy Joe 2008-11-01 . chapter 1 NICE! Cool poem thing you had there! Nice beginning to agreat story!(hopefully!) Update soon!
Crazy Joe |