   YenGirl
2008-11-03 . chapter 1Oh goody, you posted it at last! *gives a wide, wide grin before cooing at chapter again*
Even though it's an AU, it was still needed and deeply satisfying to read a wonderful account of what little I imagined. The real thing is SO much better!
Kaname's usually so commanding and in control, his unsureness and past hurt that never quite went away were so touching to read, especially when you alluded that his mental scars hurt even more than his physical one did. But his pure, hurting heart is still capable of so much love, as can be seen when he and Zero saved the children from the river and the others at the levy too, right?
Oh, of course both types of scars would not matter one bit to Zero other than his desperate want to soothe them away. Did I mention that these two are perfect for each other? *repeating it for the millionth time* Not just because they care for each other so deeply but because they are just the same inside and they need each other to heal *weeps softly*
I loved how Zero could pleasure Kaname just by rubbing THAT part of his neck... and I think someone must have thought Yuuki the same thing too in FHM, if my fuzzy memory still works. Or perhaps it was Yuuki who taught Zero that, huh? *grins* Loved it!
Mm, they are both so sensitive to each other’s touches, that renders their lovemaking even more special. Loved how Zero knew what Kaname wanted and took off his shirt accordingly when the weakened pureblood could't. And when he saw that long, long scar snaking up the pureblood’s thigh… yes, you no longer wish to hide them anymore, huh, Kaname? *smiles happily and pats lemon that has just climbed up onto the sheets beside her*
The fact that Kaname’s scars were still oh-so-sensitive makes it even more delicious and I love Zero for being so gentle and tender with his hurting prince even when he was prepping him. So sweet yet so hot! *drools onto protective little yellow umbrella determined citrus hoists up*
Oh no, Kaname! *weeps* No no no! Ah, you’re really cruel to your favourite pureblood, B.Wing! That painful and bloody flashback really sounded like... like...er, like something more than whipping had happened. Oh no, please don’t tell me someone got to Kaname first, and it isn’t his Zero! *weeps again, lemon is even more thanful for umbrella*
But if those people did...! *growls and wishes she could kill his past tormentors and if they were already dead, resurrect them just for the pleasure of doing them in again* But then again, I could be wrong so just calm down... *inhales deeply and lemon finally closes umbrella* Sorry dear, no, it’s not you I’m angry at.
Oh no, it’s not you either, Zero, you’re being amazingly tender and gentle to your prince, you know. Wow, you and Sagakure really know how to write a hurting Kaname that is in desperate need of comfort and assurance, B.Wing! *bows to you both*
*squees* And Zero kissed him! On the lips! I saw that, too! *does the happy jig with lemon before hopping back onto the bed, passes round tissues as hunter cries a little* Kaname feeling that Zero was crying on his behalf was so sweet! *beams happily around*
And Zero kissed him again! Whee..!! *reels around giddily*
This part – when they each wanted the other to claim them was truly sweet *giggles* So different from that painful library scene when they were both so mortified to have the other nobles hear who had taken whom... But it doesn’t really matter, does it? Oh, Takuma would be so proud! *beams with equal pride*
Oh *squees again* Bless Zero for being able to tease Kaname like that. I loved how Kaname responded too only, aw, he’s too weak to even reverse their positions. But Zero knows what to do so it’s OK *sighs happily* Heck, it’s more than OK, it’s awesome! *eyes glaze over and drools mindlessly onto Egyptian sheets as Zero moves down and Kaname moves up*
I loved how they found nothing but pleasure in the joining and enjoyed it for what it was - nothing to do with domination or submission, just taking, giving and sharing. *cries happily along with lemon, blessing sheets with both tears and lemon juice*
The love making was very sweet and the amount of detail just right :D
Aw, of course Kaname’s heart is worthy of letting Zero live there :D I loved how the pureblood finally came to this conclusion, and how Zero thought the exact same thing, even if neither knew it then
*happy, satisfied smile* Here’s to more AU plot bunnies, my dear! No one writes them quite like you :) |
 tnightwanderr
2008-11-02 . chapter 1This was so beautiful and breath-taking... I don't have much to say, since I am again, in awe. You are a goddess.
The small hints you have been giving in CD and BM and in this fic made me assume that Kaname was raped-used by someone in the past... The first thought was the things Ichio did to him in CD, but, well, there was no bed in that dungeon room... I assume that something happened even before that.
Yet, if Kaname was raped, it arises a question in my mind... In CD, when Zero and Kaname first consummated their bond, both of them thought to themselves that the other was their first... I thought that Kaname lost his virginity to Zero and Zero to Kaname... Or am I wrong? Or my assuming that Kaname was raped in the past is wrong?
I feel confused. But nonetheless, it was a good read. You never cease to amaze me. |
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