A very cute and rare couple, keep up the good job!

Oh he's short!!? How do you know? He doesn't look it...

But anyway, this was a good story and I enjoyed it. The pairing is sweet as well.

Some advice would be that on chapter 3, when you're describing them being intimate, you should break it up into smaller paragraphs, since the whole big thing can be quite an eyesore to read and focus on.

But apart from that, it was a good story. Keep it up ;)

I'll admit that this is a somewhat odd pairing, but you're doing a good job with it, so please (by all means) continue. :)

LOL SIEGFRIED GETTING SOME ACTION! this is very steamy! keep up the good work!

this chapter is fricken long but i liked it. kudos. \m/

cool. never thought taki & siegfried would settle down. good work!