I must say that I'm astonished that you only have one review. And shame on me for adding this to my favs without saying anything...
Seriously though. Love the blend of voices. They tell the story so well without distracting. It definitely is a comedy at the same time as its a romantic tragedy. It's nice to have that done so well.
Oh, this is wonderful! I love your characterizations, and it feels like it could be canon. The story of the paintings is very sad, but romantic. You have written it quite magically.