is a website for original work, you should post this there. And keep your chin up, the night is darkest just before the dawn. You'll get through this rough patch and you'll be stronger for it.

thunbs up D

You should post this on since this isn't fanfiction.

To be quite honest, I didn't read this - well, few glimpses of a few lines, but that's all. I just wanted to tell you that FF has a sister site, FictionPress. It's for original work as opposed to fanfiction. You might find a more willing audience there.

this is really good. you can tell that you are passionate about what you are writing and as its about you you should be. as a writer myself i think it shows a clear picture of the scene, and of what has gone on in your life in the recent past and what will in the near future. and all in a few paragraphs! x

I've never read this book, I was just curious to read the one story that was in here.

This was really good though. Your a great discriber(sorry about spelling) I think I might kinda get the drift of this story, and I want to read more and see how this girl figures everything out...if she does. So please update soon!