hahahaha i LOVE Jack in this. That is absolutely splendid. I love the word play. Fantastic writing.

It's good to know that Jack is a practical and unselfish fellow :-D. I like this story. I felt the language and character's attitude fit well :).

Loved it! The character dialogues are just pefect. Thank you! Keep writing! Loved the lines of both, Jack as careless as ever and Stephen as worried as ever hahaha. ;)

hahaha. simply a case of a fellow helping another fellow out indeed.

this was a very amusing story.

that was fantastic! beautifully written and quite humourous. m, the navy. :D :D


absolutely fabulous story.

...Wow, this is like exactly what I had in mind when I had the passing thought: huh, Master and Commander slash. And yours was the first story I clicked on. That never happens!

Yeah. Rollickingest fic ever. Cheers.

*snicker* Lovely. Thank you!