Oh wow, this was incredible. So damn hot. Ned thinks about his sister so much, I could totally see this happening. Lyanna is such a wild child and Ned is under her spell, despite all his guilt he can't help but want her. I can't get over how perfect your Lyanna is, making all the first moves and compelling Ned with her unashamed wickedness, and at the same time you maintain a frank innocence and naturalness. Hot hot hot, I encourage you to keep writing them.

I know I'm going to take some flak from hardcore ASOIF fans for saying this, but...

It was a pretty cool experiment, what you tried here. I'll admit, it was out of Ned's character, but I managed to suspend my disbelief. And it was well written as well, so I had no problems with it. Good work. You should write some more for this section of the site; it's a tad empty at the moment.