Wow just wow really I'm like I'm utterly speechless.

Oh you've gotta update this. I'm seeing him grow up through your writing. I must know more!

Ah the eyes of a child. Reading on and faving.

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Can I marry your writing. Please?

Seriously this is just... a8igye9ryg0regeg

I can't describe it.

Well done :D!!

This is almost like coming from the mind of an intelligent child, and it really draws the reader in. The 'Mommy' and 'Daddy' stuff was just adorable, and the way everything was described, the saddness at (originally) not having a Father, etc... Lovely job thus far. *clicks the next button*

This was a great story
I hate the couple with passion but love the story

That makes me happy! (maybe because I'm a sick puppy)! I love how you extended the second story. Also its dedicated to me? I'm blushing now.

That's very very sad but damned good.It's amazing,the child's feelings were written so well.

Hay that was kinda creppy so what is the boys name you never say. well thay are are together so that is good