Great work again! I liked how you used the huge skip to the Geass series time and showed Kallen touching the yukata again. I thought that was particularly good use of imagery.

Out of curiosity (and nothing to do with your fic, sorry), how much older is Naoto? Do we know? :S

Cheers,
Lord Bear

...E.

Finally came to see what you wrote, since you reassured me that it was spoiler-free. Zomg. SO CUTE. I can imagine Kallen exactly like that.

The ending line is particularly good, I think. It's sad, definitely, but the last few words make it sort of happy, too. I suppose it's bittersweet.

E. Need to watch more Geass one of these days. xD

Cute beyond cute. I was craving Naoto fic for some random reason and like magic, this appeared! :P Little Kallen is adorable and I loved the interaction between her and Naoto. It's sad we never learned more about him.

I also quite liked the abrupt change from cutesy lightheartedness to the nostalgia and angst of the end. I'm not sure why, exactly, but it's probably because I didn't expect it, and it's very fitting with the show; all abrupt transitions from happiness to sadness.

I enjoyed this little piece and I hope you eventually post your L/K fic, because this site needs it! ('Post-series' and 'multichapter' made me squeal in delight, lol.) And yes... Jun Fukuyama's voise *is* sexy. :P

Wow. As short as this was, it was really powerful, especially the last line. "Too bad Naoto wouldn't be around to smile and tell her she looked good in it". It goes from hopeful from the line before it, to sorrow and it just leaves me feeling so sad. :)

I wish Sunrise included Naoto in the show more; I really did want to know about him.

Love,
Ivy

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Yay. SOMEONE WROTE SOMETHING WITH NAOTO IN IT. :3
That makes me happy.
Strange, I thought Kallen would be all, hardcore Japanese-girl in this. Oh well, you surprised me. :3
It's cute. ^^