Awesome, being from Jersey myself (and living in the Pine Barrens) I grew up with all the tales of the Jersey Devil. You did a fantastic job this was chilling.

"Oh my God" indeed. *shudder* Thank God I read this in the morning, else I'd have nightmares myself. I hate scary punch lines like that!
Gah. How creepy. I gotta read another one just to get those images out of my head …

In the immortal words of Velma Dinkley: Jinkies!

Another wonderfully written piece CL.

O. Scary!

Nice Halloween spiritid story and a very sweet McKeller fluff apart from the obvious creepy parts. I actually looked up the Jersey Devil in Wikipedia after reading it! So nice shotout from Rodney. :D And the ending was classic, job well done!

Oh my, that was great!! Spooky good and full of McKeller fluff, what a great combination! Thanks for sharing with us!

A little confusing, but ever so creepy. Jersey devils are my worst nightmare and I was wondering if I should read this or not when it popped up in my mailbox--I guess I'll have to wait and see if I can fall asleep tonight!

Have I told you how much I love you're voice as a writer lately?

I haven't? Well then...

SPOT ON! Absolutely beautiful fic... Rodney trying to comfort her through laughter, as only he can... and the thought of shirtless Rodney in the shower... *drools on keyboard* Just pick my jaw up off the floor and sweep all these dirty thoughts into the gutter! =D

I like the twist- was she really dreaming? Or was she unconsciously working through what she had seen that night... Was it really a Halloween ghost story induced moment?

Brilliant!

5 stars from my McKeller heart! =D

Wow! Oh my god that was a good story! I loved how you ended it! I love ghost stories and this is one of the best ones. No worries about it coming out a little late, it was definitly worth the wait!!

Whoa! That is pretty scary! I like how it's only a dream but when Rodney takes off his shirt(swoons), we see the bruise.

Bravo, for this totally scary story!

Thanks for the spooky Halloween Story!! Some funny stuff too...like McKay calling Sheppard 'Steven King'. :o) DA

Oh. Oh, my God. I love ghost stories and all that goes with them, probably more than anybody in their right mind should.

Which makes this my favorite of your McKeller stories so far. Keep up the good work!

Jeepers creepers do you know how to tell a good horror story or what? Wow kiddo you put Stephen King to shame. No worries on it not being out on All Hallows Eve, it was still scary as heck and very, very, very, very, very, very, worth the wait. Astoundingly brilliant as always.