LAWL. OwO
wish I could see that. XD
too bad I live in Oz. >w<

Nice fanfic.

I really like this! The Chuck/Dan pairing is WAY TOO HOT!

LOL!
HA. i just read 'anons' review. sex talk? THAT WAS SEX TALK!?? LOL, I THOUGHT YOU WERE JUST TRYING TO MAKE THEM SOUND DRUNK!
man, you should have heard me trying to pronouce it out loud...“I ju-uust don’t wa-A-nt tu see yo-OR ugly face, is a-A-ll,"
HA HA.
man, this seriously cracked me up.

LMFAO!
“yo-OR a-A-fraied, huff, wha-A Daddie will think.”
slash! whop!
yes! why arent there more chuk/dan stories!?

well written but could have done without the weird speech I think readers can work out how people talk during sex for themselves without you putting in the extra punctuation/letters it's a little distracting.

Hehehe. This is fantastic. Even though I'm not a massive Dan/Chuck fan, this is really good!