no, this ddnt suck!i thought it was pretty good!:)

i wanted to review, but then you told me to shut up. i am hurt, hannah! XD it was awesome talking to you on the phone just now. cant wait for you to come back from PLKN!

anyways... u knw i dun watch naruto right? so i dun knw anyone else besides naruto, sakura n sasuke. hehe. so thank god this is AU. is sakura gonna seduce sasuke?? I wanna join XD *mengada. just kidding. and the story is not bad la, hannah. its just different ;P chill, bbe, chill

is she going to seduce sasuke? :)

lmao u can be like...

As she walked down the corridor to her prey's room, she tightened the robe around her body getting ready to recieve info..

idk your plot so yeah

Oh balderdash, it's was fine. :)
This was a really enticing chapter and I hope to see it updated.
Keep up the excellent work!

Aw, man, really. Don't think it sucks! It definitely doesn't. It's just WAY different. Therefore, amazing. :) You write well, and this is interesting. Keep up the good work!

omg this so did not suck! it was awesomely awesome! lol. anyways i would make a longer review but i have to get ready to go to a concert! go dashboard confessionals and panic at the disco! bye bye! update soon!

I love it, I love it, I love it. *_*
The way you write is very enticing.
I liked the way you phrased "The quintessential beating of her fingertips against solid buttons seemed melodious – easing the sweet woman into a somewhat dream-like state where it was only her, the keyboard, the screen, and the enticing aroma of black coffee, surfacing from deep within her favourite porcelain mug."

Seriously,
I love it.

Update son (:

It didn't suck, it was an awesome chapter.
Hope to see you update soon.
Well done

~HeavensIntensity.