|Reviews for Cause and Effect|
| Tyson332 11/3/08 . chapter 1
Very, very good. Well-written, nice flow and a realistic portrayal of Nodokas thoughts, which I absolutely loved, by the way. :D
Especially the way you used Asunas line at the end, "Do you just not do dying, Honya?". Left a strong impression on the reader and made the whole story a bit... deeper, I guess.
Well, hope to see some more works from you in the near future.
So keep up the good work! :)