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Reviews for: Eternal Flame
Maskelle
2008-12-09 . chapter 19
I´m a little bit behind on my reading so sorry for the late review. This story is getting better and better. Poor Leith. Hope he will be okay but Sally will take good care of him. loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-26 . chapter 13
oh my god that was such a bad line of Quatre! Trowa, do something about it. I just love the Duo telephone lines. I hope he will be able to pick up the phone again. I wonder what that message is which Leiths dad was able to send. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-25 . chapter 12
oh the plot is thickening. You can always trust a crook to dobblecross you. Sadly Shand had to learn that the hard way. Well, now they will have some more attention for those 5 missing chips. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-23 . chapter 11
I just loved those telephone lines Duo used. If you don't mind I'll use them sometimes. Grin, Duos behavior might make you feel akward but it will make you feel at home pretty soon. If only the grown ups would have talked with the kids they migth have noticed the connection between the two things. Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-19 . chapter 9
Rollerblades?!? That is just so funny! I wonder what this thing with these mobile suit is. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-16 . chapter 8
Grin, I want a person like Duo on my wedding. No, scratch that just having him as a neighbour would be fun. I think Heero understands now what Duo wants. Oh and Benny drinking punch:) That was funny. Poor Leith, not even knowing what happend to his dad. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-14 . chapter 7
wow, they managed to the whole ceremonie without problems. That is a record for every friend of Duo Maxwell. Well, I hope he wouldn´t be so horrible to ruin one of his friends his weddingceremonie. Altough I think he wouldn´t like Wufei and Sally take their revenge. The dresses were all so pretty and I like how you described them. I´m glad that Leith´s dad survived and I wonder who the person was who he met. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-12 . chapter 6
Heero is one mean person. Poor Wufei. Imagine all those people watching him when he walked in. I did love Leiths reaction. I do hope his dad will survive though. He may do bad things but I wouldn´t want Leith to become an orphan. I´m curious what will happen next. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
Maskelle
2008-11-11 . chapter 5
These last two chapters had me laughing. The idea of Wufei in a tutu is priceless. But if I was Duo I would have run for the hills and stay there for like a year. I think payback will be a **. Oh and I really like Leith and I am very curious to what will happen with the chips and Leith´s father. Loved it and can´t wait for the next chapter!
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