 Lecidre 2009-03-20 . chapter 14Such a sweet, romantic ending! Everyone is content with being with their loved ones, and they live so happily ever after... The last part of this chapter simply made me smile, especially the Hijikata/Otae version:
- "As long as you’re here with me, Toushi... That’s all I need."
- "I want you, the person who believes in me, to stay with me. I want to keep you happy, Otae."
Aww, that was extremely lovely! My heart just melted when I saw these sentences. Jeez, I wish these two could end up like this in the manga like how you depcited them here... *pouts*
Congrats for finishing this fic successfully, my friend! Good job! :] |
 Lecidre 2009-03-20 . chapter 13Aww, the union of Hijikata and Otae in the end of this chapter made me grin like a fool in front of my computer screen... Finally, he came home for her and their son. So touching and sweet! *bounces around happily*
And Kagi has a little brother! Thank goodness Gintoki managed to come back to Kagura successfully. It's also great to see that Kaede finally sorted out her family matters. Now she can be free and be together with her beloved Okita.
(The next chapter is the last one of this fic? Wow, I'd better go read it immediately...) |
 SpyralHax 2009-03-14 . chapter 14Seems like the personalities of the parents still live on in their kids. Again, nice story. |
 SpyralHax 2009-03-14 . chapter 13A happy ending for the story. Just what I like to see. Great job with the story. Loved reading it. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 11Ah! Wow, there has to be more of this, right? Can't wait for an update to this story. The tension >. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 10Not sure I would classify this as lemon-y, but it was good reading. Lots happening at once, so I hope it all works itself out. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 9Need more fluff. Glad that Kagura made it through. Looking forward to more. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 7Bad news all around for the guys it seems :( |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 6Bad news so soon after getting back. Gin is really unlucky it seems. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 5Somehow I don't think that such a thing would stop Kagura, what with her ability to even intimidate Gin when she chooses :P Touching stuff here, and all good. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 4Poor Kagura, having to be apart from her dear Gin-chan. Can't wait for more of this story. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 3Seems like things are going to be heating up soon, and I can't wait for more of this. Good stuff. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 2A bit OOC, definitely, but the sadist part is intact, the major part of his personality. Good stuff so far. |
 SpyralHax 2009-02-05 . chapter 1Gin is such a softie at heart, especially where Kagura is concerned. A bit OOC but I still liked it a lot. Looking forward to more of this. Not enough GinKagu on this site for my liking, so good to see one. |
 Lecidre 2008-12-31 . chapter 11Aww, Sa-chan is such a nice and considerate person! It's so kind of her to help the women and children out during the difficult time caused by the war... I really admire the ninja's generosity and kindness while reading this chapter. And wow, Kaugra is going to deliver another baby right now? So many children in this fic! Hope Kaede would be safe when she's out of the safe hideout.
Keep up the good work! And wish you a Happy New Year! :] |