|Reviews for Long Night|
| I'm.Crazy.All.The.Time 12/17/10 . chapter 1
Why has nobody reviewed this shit right here, cos damn girl, this is pretty uber amazing. Normally I hate fics when authors OC's aren't afraid of vampires (like the twilight shit) but this, this neat little piece of work is funny as anything.
When she delivers the kick to the cashier, I was pissing myself laughing. LOL.
You write humor very well, and I could see this playing in front of me so vividly it made me laugh all the more picturing this whole interactiom between her and the vamps.
You say this was English? Well if I were a teacher I would have had to grade you a B, because your spelling is pretty darn good, puncuation is done well, it's not rushed, you kept it at a slow and steady pace, and what I loved the most...
HUMOR! Fuck ye! LOL with reading this fic. Rare piece of work here, completely unique... fantastic.
Kudos with this piece of cracking work. Well done, amigo :-)
| llllllllllll 3/26/09 . chapter 1
Cool story, made me laugh lots!