moving and rather sweet

That was really good. I liked it. I thought there was going to be a cat fight when Narcissa showed up.

So bittersweet. They should never have died. It was a waste. Hedwig so unnecessary and very unlike what a good Auror would have done that night.

so sweet

This may or may not ever be updated, but if it is, I want to know about it. I cannot help but agree with all your points on the Weasley family and it is a disheartening thing that JKR did to her characters.

I will defer to your judgment as to whether the other parts of the story are no good. What I've read here is not just good enough, it is very, *very* good.

I've enjoyed all your stories but have never posted a review (my apologies for that); they are some of the most thoughtful, to say nothing of thought-provoking, stories in the Potter universe. Your take on the characters and their motivations, to say nothing of their actions based on those motivations, are always insightful.

Thank you.

Hi,

I enjoyed your scene. It is rare where you can simply pluck a scene out of a story and make it work.

Yours did.

Thanks for sharing it.

O-C

I liked it!

Well...all I can say is, that was beautiful. And, I'm sure she is graceful, and lovely, and that Remus is envied of everyone there.

This story is very well thought and and the writing is impeccable. It develops logically and carries through to the end extremely well. Hermione's comment at the end are wonderful, and Fleur's short conversation with Ed is well done also. The ending is extremely poignant, as it should be in a story on such a theme. Well done, well written indeed.

Well written! Pity it wasnt longer.

This was great. Please, if you have an accompanying story post it as well.

This was sad. Very good, but also very sad. Nice work. :)

Excellent.

I agree wholeheartedly with your charectarizations (sp?) of the Weasley brood. Except Ron. I think you're being very generous in this story.

Wonderfully substansive interaction with the Potters and Andromeda. The Andromeda/Narcissa showdown is great. I can see Narcissa trying to amend post DH (maybe even sincerely, doubt it tho) but she would NEVER admit her culpability in a wrongdoing. Not very Slytherin if she did.

The end interaction re: Tonks & Remus dancing was great. Very touching.

Thanks for this little nugget.

muggledad

If the rest of your story is as good as this little piece, PLEASE POST IT! This was so good! A real tear jerker too. I would love to see the rest of it.