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afrozenheart412
2009-01-12 . chapter 8
This has been a wonderful journey. The wedding...I hope we get to see this in the show someday. Great job.
laurzz
2009-01-10 . chapter 8
Stuffers!

How i love thee and this fic, let me count the ways!

I'm saddened that it finished, but, it was a wonderful little journey you took DL on, and i throughly enjoyed each and every chapter. With this chapter being no exception.

The song choice - gosh, utterly PERFECT!

I adored the flashforward into the future. Seeing how smart and absolutely adorable Roasbel was. Ugh! Perfect end to a perfect story.

*tackles*
18lzytwner
2009-01-10 . chapter 8
This was adorable. I loved it. So much fluff. ;D
A-shiningstar
2009-01-09 . chapter 8
Just lovely! Wonderful ending to a well written story. :)
laurzz
2009-01-01 . chapter 7
Darlin' this chapter was absolutely incredible - i loved it so much! How Danny was there in perfect timing, and was there to support Linds through her giving birth. Utterly perfect, considering the circumstances - but then again, this is them, and when is it even plain sailing?

Loved Danny's flashback to NWILL, and how you had the dialogue from the episode in there, old school DL, huh? Good times.

Just the whole chapter was perfect, and captured Rosabel (which is a beautiful name) being a christmas miracle, perfectly.

Well done darlin' another fantastic chapter!
18lzytwner
2008-12-29 . chapter 7
So much fluff, so little time. ;) Loved this chapter. Glad to see mommy and baby are doing fine. Danny is being so adorable. Ruben dream was slightly creepy. ;D Perhaps now they can move on was the ponit. ;)
nikkilou
2008-12-29 . chapter 6
Loved it. Please update soon.
A-shiningstar
2008-12-28 . chapter 7
Loved it! :) Beautiful name! Can't wait to read more. :)
afrozenheart412
2008-12-24 . chapter 6
Okay, I've been very bad by lurking on this story, but I just had to plead with you not to hurt the baby. I don't think Lindsay or Danny could survive this. But otherwise everything in this story has been perfect. I love how sweet and caring Danny has been in this fic.
laurzz
2008-12-24 . chapter 6
Dearest stuffs. Honestly, if i didnt love you so much, i would be pelting you with M&M's right now. Just kidding, darlin'. It was a fabulous chapter with an incredible twist on the end.

So many lovely aspects of this chapter - i just loved it!

And, honestly, it amazes me the way in which you write. It's incredible hun! You're a fantastic writer!

And, do i sense a certain Meepers had a part to play in the naming of Lindsay's mom?

Wonderful chapter hun, and warm christmas wishes to you and your family!

*tackles*
18lzytwner
2008-12-24 . chapter 6
Gah! *falls off computer chair, types from floor* How could you? Stuffy, you little stinker. ;) I love this story. More coming soon I hope.
SketchGal2
2008-12-23 . chapter 2
This was a wonderful chapter, and the same goes for the first chapter as well(i just chose to review this one after a read the first one). You've chosen the perfect balance in the way for telling Danny and Lindsay's tale. You've done it in a incredibly interesting, and heartfelt way. I see no typos, no grammer errors, and whatnot so your all good! I also love how you chose to take such matters as Lindsay and Danny making up, and how they've progressed too. You've got me hooked from beginning to end! Now I'm off to read the third chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep on writing! =D
A-shiningstar
2008-12-23 . chapter 6
I am resisting the urge to yell at you...do you consider this some kind of Christmas gift!?!?!!?!? ok the resisting didn't work...sorry

I loved the part up until the cafe stuff...yeah...and I'm hoping you update very very very soon! Because really Christmas isn't for another 24 hours or so and you should give your gift closer to then. ;)

Oh having just slept on an air mattress last night...I was cracking up at the thought of a very pregnant Lindsay sleeping on an air mattress...why did her parents let her do that...all I say about that is I hope their air mattress was better than mine! haha

Merry Christmas! Update soon! :)
18lzytwner
2008-12-16 . chapter 5
Oh so adorable. I love how this is coming together.
CSINYsmacked
2008-12-15 . chapter 5
that made tears well up in my eyes,
it's like I could see it happening!
:D

and then of course hawkes helping out,
that was cute!
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