you've changed the naem and plot so many times that i feel this poor story is getting confused. and as what to tell ur inner editor, put up ur mental middle finger and tell it to sit and spin. and who doesn't hate dates? well hope you can continue it this time.


With Feeble hope,



Pyro Psychotic

great job, i love it.

excellent work, you've done a great job with this. :)

eh having tseng be an ** is fun.

Wow I like awesome. Off the read the next chapter.

It's good so far ^^. Although, about halfway down you said that Reno was younger and quicker but Reno was older and more experienced. I'm guessing you meant Rude for the second one. Can;t wait to read more ^^

good stroy, and it moves not to fast and not slow either.
I'll be waiting for the new chapter.

oh~ I forgot to tell you that the dog is very cute, although I'm a cat-person but, I must admit that I would love to have a dog as cute as beau ^_^