I like this story, I really do. I hope your muse allows you to continue it some day. :)

Chris

I can't believe this story has only 7 reviews, now 8, and has fallen to the way side.

Great story development and wonderful plot.

It Interesting chapter,It seem that it a big sign that Hermione is in love with Ron. Harry won't fight Hermione for how he feel about her, Hermione will fight Harry so that Voldemort don't win and protect the wizard world. There is two different reasons why Harry & Hermione made their choice, beside Hermione mention Ron first and an lot time a person who will name a person that mean more to them first. I admit when I first started reading this story I thought that it be a Harry & Hermione pairing, but not anymore.

Interesting chapter

I assume you don`t have a beta or I`d be firing his or her ass! Still it`s a giggle and that`s what you are clearly aiming for

Let's see.

This story has potential, but it feels rushed, like you didn't care much about its quality and just wanted to get it out ASAP.

Here are some suggestions to improve:

-Commas do exist, and they're -very- important, because they provide much needed pauses to speeches and descriptions. Without them, it feels like you should read all the sentences without stopping once, and that definitely makes everything feel rushed.

-Descriptions may seem boring, expecially if they're long, but they're very much needed. They give "flavour" to your story and help your reader picture in their mind what you pictured in yours.

-Elaborate and expand on (almost) everything. Episodes like the argument between Molly and Arthur, Ginny being possesed by Voldemort, and the appereance of Kami-sama, would have been a lot better if you had made them longer, used more description and dwelled on the character's personality.

As I said before, this story has a great potential, but you have to do it justice.

Well I do find this story Interesting, but at the same time odd. If Voldemort has been in Ginny all this time then Harry destroy the Diary did nothing much, I thought that since Harry killed the spirit in the Diary that Ginny was free of Voldemort. I know it been an couple of chapter since I review but I am having doubt if this story for me, I think that your a good writer but I find it hard to read a story that I don't know what about and what the pairing are if any

Interesting chapter

This is a very Interesting and weird chapter at the same time, I admit that I check an couple of time to see if this Harry Potter story since there no character I ever heard before.