Aw, it's so cute. I love it. ^_^ Really really good job. ^^

Adore it, truely beautiful.

That was so sad...nice backstory

Great start, I like where this story is going.
You really portrayed the characters well, hope to see more. : D

Awk I loved it!
It's complete too bad :( I would of liked more
But wow!
I always liked the idea of Mello giving Matt his beloved goggles
Good job