Oh my god i love those last words, they totally make the story.
that was really good C:

Aw, it's so cute. I love it. _ Really really good job.

Adore it, truely beautiful.

That was so sad...nice backstory

Great start, I like where this story is going.
You really portrayed the characters well, hope to see more. D

Awk I loved it!
It's complete too bad I would of liked more

But wow!

I always liked the idea of Mello giving Matt his beloved goggles

Good job