I loved the idea behind this story, but not so much the story itself. I think would have enjoyed it more if the story had taken itself seriously. (The blatant OOCnes of most of the characters particularly annoyed me, and prevented me from getting into the story.)

You're brilliant.

i love the idea the sailorscots as jal

the outers haertou as firstrome out qstion

aeraera greeaoweorr

naptun aqaman hm

beides here a requst the sailorscouts as yugioh-cahcters

so i put to you

Got a couple of continuity questions, back in chapt. 7, Beryl has picture of a younger version of herself, Prince Darien and the Moon Princess.
How could Beryl have younger picture of herself if she was an adult when she died? How does this fit in with Serena being a clone/genegineered lifeform (Lunarian and Kryptonian mix)? Is she actually the Moon Princess reborn or will that turn out to be someone else entirly? There is some support for it to be someone else as Serena didn't transform to the Moon Princess during the fight
Anyway I think you might want to flip DC characters for Pluto and Saturn (misprint?)though I can see a Pluto/Stranger mix I certainly can see Saturn/Darkseid...Omega Force/SG Surprise, TheSilence/Anti-life Equation they go so well together its almost frightening!
hm..Hotaru as Orion's daughter, big D trying to use her... thats almost enough for its own stand alone series
Keep up the great work!
Dave

I'm sorry that you think that the battle was too quick. But remember, at the level Beryl and Sailor Moon were fighting, a moment to US would be a few minutes to THEM. Besides, we all know who was going to win (yeah, that's it...).
If I do a sequel, I will touch on the other Sailors and series. I wrote Serena as to be not really into Darien, so she would get a real surprise once Rini shows up, who will claim to be her and Darien's kid.
I still haven't made up my mind on which Sailor will be connected to which DC hero (or villain). Sailor Uranus will be connected to either Hawkman or Starman mythos, Sailor Neptune will definitely be connected to Aquaman mythos, Sailor Saturn will either be connected to Hourman or Dr. Fate mythos, and Sailor Pluto will be connected to either The Stranger...or Darkside (heh).
Anyway, let me know what you think. Later!-De

Aw. Finished already? At least I guessed right on Serena's Kryptonian name. Nice concept making her a clone of Queen Serenity, Jor-El, and Lara. At least her ties to both Krypton and the Moon Kingdom make very good sense. Good concept. Though her battle with Beryl/Metallia seemed rather quick and like too easy.
Will there be R/S/SuperS/Stars seasons perhaps? If yes, bring em on!

Oh yes, I believe you were looking for ideas for the outers? Here are some suggestions:
Uranus Samurai from Challenge of the Superfriends; see this . #samurai
Pluto The Guardian (Cadmus Project see this . #guardian

Wow! Nice work here mixing DC with Sailor Moon. Now how shall we call the group? Justice League Senshi or something? And by the way cool name to give to Beryl (Ber-El), so she's also Kryptonian, as well Queen Serenity and Darien? But how would the Moon Kingdom fit in then? So what's Serena's Kryptonian name? Ser-El perphaps? *shudders at who Rinni/Sailor Mini Moon will become Tokyo Kid? (i.e. something based on Metropolis Kid the clone of Superman
Keep em coming!

This is a very strange story

Somehow, I'm not surprised that Max Lord would do something like that. And we all know who is going to be the better of the two. (little hint, the name doesn't start with a 'B Uranus as a Knight? Hm, I could see that. Going to Japan while Jack looks for rare stuff from WWII and some such. Though, she has the original gold Cosmic Converter Belt or a Gravity Rod and Jack has the Cosmic Staff, and those two assist the Senshi and it's revealed the Alex, is Sailor Uranus. Just don't tell Ted! And you should make Saturn connected to Dr. Fate. You know, Kent passed it to her when he died and Nabu has been watching over her for a long time, waiting for her destiny to play out. As well as tutoring her in the occult ways of her father or whatever the conncetion will be. As for Tuxedo Mask, if you really wanna screw with it, he's really an agent of Karmic Justice, name of Brand, Darien 'Boston' Brand. But, that's what I would do.

Good so far and updat ASAP!

You haven't updated yet! WHY NOT!

Hehehehe... This is a good one... I especially loved the Mercury Flash and Venus thing. It just works so well, especially the small puns.

Though I have to ask, if Serena was from another planet, how is she the princess of the *Moon*? She got reborn somewhere else?

Oi! I have to take a break. This story's messing with my head! TV Guide in class? You, and those at that school, watch way too much TV. Keep going, though (I mean with the fic). BTW, is the real Superman going to be introduced? (Begins to drool at the mental image of Tom Welling.
Ja 'til later!

You ever gonna update this? I really like this one and would like to see it updated. Here's a novel idea, two of them actually: Hotaru is a Nelson (as in Doctor Fate) and Setsuna/Trista is along the lines of the Phantom Stranger. Just an idea, but those are also my guesses.

Be'Jammin

aswome moive fuesing sauperman maxing sm&sauperman

but woithout knowing got raigth it,s reumoerd serina once did have a goldfash it die her

so meina is woederwoman i ejoy the iead of sailormoon-waith sauperman,s powers beids thery one whaer rama-grils geines! also cood do one whaer the yoigoh-grils eand as geines out of qstion

Cool! She's a Kryptonian! Will you show Superman?