Oh yea.
I sorta guessed halfway that the magazine wasn't **. Loved the Badass Alto at the end. And your technique with spacing dialogue out with silence (...) is very effective!

They should make voice drama's out of this...

I cannot love it anymore!
That's to great~

ROFL!

OH MAN =)) CUP HOLDERS!

your sense of humor is extremely EXTREMELY fun to read XD i totally breezed through this fic with a smile on my face and totally laughed out at some of sheryl's antics.

The real contents of the centerfold was kind of predictable with the flow of the story (it was a toss-up between sheryl and vfs really) but that doesn't make the fic any less fun

good job :D

LOL.
detailed ending!!
just kidding.
its fun to let our imagination run wild sometimes.
XDD

Diva...

you...

are...

a...

PEDOPHILE!

DOKUN DOKUN DOKUN!

This fic would haev been better if it were Ranka!

O!! Loved this! :D
Lol! I thought it'd be planes :) Totally more Alto's style ^_~ And dayyum his attention is focused!

I wish there was more description at the end, but it had it's own charm... definitely hott!

Thanks!

yess steshy, yes X3

Bwahahaha, arusheri mind ** ftw. >>; teeheehee. XD

Are we getting any more of your other project anytime soon? ;3