| Reviews for Centerfolds |
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Astray71 8/2/11 . chapter 1Ahahahahahaha! Cup holders :) |
pinksongstress 3/29/10 . chapter 1he's in love with his plane great fic :D |
LadyDream3512 12/16/09 . chapter 1Awesome job! I love it! Keep up the great work |
Mikorio 3/22/09 . chapter 1Oh yea. I sorta guessed halfway that the magazine wasn't porn. Loved the Badass Alto at the end. And your technique with spacing dialogue out with silence (...) is very effective! They should make voice drama's out of this... |
yuikure 2/2/09 . chapter 1I cannot love it anymore! That's to great |
m o o g l e d a i m e 12/25/08 . chapter 1ROFL! |
turtledork 12/5/08 . chapter 1OH MAN )) CUP HOLDERS! your sense of humor is extremely EXTREMELY fun to read XD i totally breezed through this fic with a smile on my face and totally laughed out at some of sheryl's antics. The real contents of the centerfold was kind of predictable with the flow of the story (it was a toss-up between sheryl and vfs really) but that doesn't make the fic any less fun good job :D |
psychedelia 11/25/08 . chapter 1LOL. detailed ending! just kidding. its fun to let our imagination run wild sometimes. XDD |
stellie 11/9/08 . chapter 1 Diva... you... are... a... PEDOPHILE! |
diva 11/8/08 . chapter 1 DOKUN DOKUN DOKUN! This fic would haev been better if it were Ranka! |
sakR9 11/4/08 . chapter 1 O! Loved this! :D Lol! I thought it'd be planes :) Totally more Alto's style _ And dayyum his attention is focused! I wish there was more description at the end, but it had it's own charm... definitely hott! Thanks! |
emochinchilla 11/2/08 . chapter 1 yess steshy, yes X3 Bwahahaha, arusheri mind porn ftw. ; teeheehee. XD Are we getting any more of your other project anytime soon? ;3 |