A great story. Very good.

Ye Gods, that's brutal. Good work!

That did NOT go in the direction I was expecting it to. Got half way through the story thinking things were pretty much normal - though I knew there was something odd about Luke - then all of a sudden we're in the middle of AU.

I think you did the breaking of the relationship between Leia and her father really well. With her use of the force and him handling everything really badly. Can’t help wondering if she’s going to go off into her own trek through the dark side, with her thought that this wasn’t Luke’s universe and Vader’s that she would meet with the Emperor to ask for teaching.

Oh wow! I really liked this! Great job!

This is excellent-there is such a sense of movement in your writing that is so difficult to master, though you have done it well. Interesting concept. I had no idea who the visitor would be and it was definitely surprising. Great job!