 dreamerandwriter93 2008-11-15 . chapter 3Your story is really interesting. I can not wait to see where you will take it. I am waiting for your next chaptar |
 princetongirl 2008-11-09 . chapter 3loved it update soon |
 StoryTagger 2008-11-05 . chapter 2Haha, that was funny how on Saturday night it seemed like one thing, and then the flashback kind of made you want to hit yourself in the head for thinking that. :) Very good job, looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Wepluvzyou 2008-11-05 . chapter 2love it update soon! |
 princetongirl 2008-11-05 . chapter 2loved it update soon |
 princetongirl 2008-11-04 . chapter 1loved it update soon |
 my shangri-la 2008-11-04 . chapter 2Argh!! I wanna know what's going on!! Great job though. Update soon!! |
 kthxilyxxx 2008-11-03 . chapter 2I'm loving where this went, and I can't wait to find out what he wants from her. wink wink. haha :) |
 kthxilyxxx 2008-11-03 . chapter 1this is interesting! can't wait for more! |
 happybunny24 2008-11-02 . chapter 1I love it so far! Please update soon! |
 gopher101 2008-11-02 . chapter 1I like this story so far, it has a good start to it. I have one piece of CC though: Casey and Derek would not go to a pediatrician. They are past the age limit, they would more than likely go to George's and Nora's physician. I know it's a small thing and to late to change. I am just mentioning this for future refrence. Back to the good stuff, I like the way this story is written so far: the grammer is excellent, it flows, and it's eaiser to follow. This so far has been a lovely read. |