Very nice - and a good point. You would have thought, in fact, that Tom woould ve had Severus brew Felix and have all the DEs drink it before the battle. Oh joy - you've found anoother plot hole.

Nice! Even Severus can use a little luck.

I love the visceral imagery, the sensation that time has slowed down and every minute detail is rendered large by the impact of the moment. Very well done.

Yes to what? The limit of luck? Yes, it is Felix Felicis? Yes, she was here for him?
If only he could have drunk it in canon... That shack had never bore him well, did it? Cheers.

He could have sipped Felix Felicis till the dragons roosted in canon; he'd still never have caught a break. Thank goodness for fandom.