 Yur-Fluffyness 2009-11-01 . chapter 14Wow, this is great so far :3
I wonder where Drakken has gone.
Are Kimmie and Shego gonna interact soon? |
 List of Romantics 2009-09-22 . chapter 1Mercy, this is good! I just hope what I think is going to happen doesn't happen... or maybe I DO want it to ;-) Well, one thing in particular anyway.
Great Beginning. I'm looking forward to more. |
 zzzoo99 2009-09-07 . chapter 14macke the last chpater taht shego go back to team go
and team go will be united again |
 Masterperson 2009-04-29 . chapter 14This is a really awesome story, I like how well set up your team go story is and I like that I have no idea what is going on... I hope Kim and Shego's stories meat up again though. |
 Katsumara 2009-02-17 . chapter 13So she's discovering just how perfect Ron may be for her, but based on earlier conversations, it seems to be causing a big "distraction" for their plans for the world, and what not.. so she chooses to separate herself from him for now while working on the early stages, eh? Well that's not a good idea, Kim. Usually, you don't push away the people you need most. Bad Kim, bad. =P Well I guess she is "evil" and what not... so it'd make sense.
Anyway, I can't wait for more. I'm hoping this is just a business split-up for now, and not a ..relationship split-up, though it does have Ron worrying as usual. |
 MrDrP 2009-02-17 . chapter 13Ah, so Kim, in an attempt to remove any distractions from her plan to take over the world has now unwittingly created a huge one. I can't see how she's not going to regret what she's just done to her relationship with Ron.
Looking forward to the next installment in what has turned out to be quite an angst-fest. |
 Angus MacSpon 2009-02-13 . chapter 10Of course, if anyone in the team had been a bit smarter, they'd have just left Mego in the Clandestine pub, shrunk small, to eavesdrop on any revealing conversations after they left.
Been a while since I read any of this story, so I'm playing catch-up, but still enjoying it. Though I have to admit I'm getting into the Shego chapters more than the Kim ones. Not sure if that's about the reversed personality and hence greater sympathy, or just about me. :) |
 Hobbes the Cat 2009-02-02 . chapter 12Hey nice fight scene! Soon to be followed up by another nice fight scene...hm. I'm sensing violent vibes from the author. Ah well, more good stuff! |
 CajunBear73 2009-02-02 . chapter 12Some things of Shego she either didn't or didn't want to know about herself got sprung with that device. In between all persona known and hidden within.
Quite the debate inside to deal with as something destructive this way comes. |
 Hobbes the Cat 2009-01-28 . chapter 11In response to MrDrP...Never give up on the Kigo! |
 MrDrP 2009-01-28 . chapter 11If I were you, I'd just give up the Kigo and stick with K/R -- you do the latter quite nicely. What I liked so much about your portrayal was that it was in turns funny, sweet, substantive, marked by the occasional annoyance, very in character (even with the Attitudinated personalities), and evocative of the ethos of show. (see goats; disrupted dinner).
Beyond the most satisfactory K/R was the engaging and believable way Kim has come to appreciate the complexity of their Attitudinated situation and how she is now poised to do something very bad to do something very good.
The Monty situation was a nice comic highlight. I'm curious as to what's going to happen with him.
Looking forward to more. |
 Hobbes the Cat 2009-01-28 . chapter 6Dang, looks like Kim's really going nuts on being the bad guy. Neither she nor Ron seem to have any problem with the idea of actually killing someone off. Either that or they're really good at making it look like it doesn't bother them. The only problem I have is that while the attitude change would make them think this way I can't see how it's making Ron suddenly smart enough to make all his new inventions work. Just a thought. Still loving the story though! |
 Hobbes the Cat 2009-01-28 . chapter 5Just started reading this and ahould be able to knock off the last few chapters you have up before I wander off ofr teh day. Gotta say i'm really enjoying this. Wasn't really sure what too expect when I started reading it, as the title didn't really clue me in much. I've been enjoying it all but this chapter was really good. I assume Shego hasn't actually had to kill before & to be somewhat forced into it & then thanked for it has to be a bit disconcerting. Good stuff & i'm off to read the rest. |
 Katsumara 2009-01-28 . chapter 11Now this is some awesome K/R if I've ever seen some. I'll honestly say... I'm surprised. I'm quite surprised indeed. This was a wonderful chapter, and the end? Oh boy. Ron could be busy for a while... |
 CajunBear73 2009-01-27 . chapter 11Interesting date indeed. It all made Kim happy even though Ron didn't keep to his agenda, or when life intruded on his timetable.
In the interim, though, Kim found middle ground as she seems to be shifting from the immoral end of the spectrum she and Ron seemed to be at. Some eggs to be broken by Ron with her also.
Ron got brownie points overall from Kim for what he did setup for her and what they did take part in. She's happy and he's happy with her.
Monty's going to be a problem as he does his worst to muck things up for Ron, and in turn, Kim.
Now about that plan of theirs and their recruitment... |