I thought you pulled off the scare factor very well and also the pace was well kept too. My only complaint is that I probably shouldn't have read this right before bed... Shiver...

...THAT WAS TOTALLY...FRICKEN...DAMN...OH MY...EEEEEE...AAAAMMMMAAAZZZIIINGGGG! Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop. I almost chucked my phone against the wall because its being completely stupid and rebooting every two seconds and I wasn't done with the story yet! (I screamed into a pillow..) but oh my god this was SO GOOD! Honestly I fell in love with your writing. You are making me so happy and excited! It was so scary, sad, SO CUTE, suspenseful, and DID YOU SEE THAT ENDING? There HAS to be a sequal. I mean come one the monster is still after her and they hear/saw(kinda) him! Make it take place years later when ichi and hime are years in to their relationship (their status is up to you) and all the friends go on a vacation together and wala! He pops up again! This in on my top 10 favorite stories! :D

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE YYYYOOOOUUUU!

And keigo, that funny coward. :D

I loved this story! Really good job.)

So spicy!

Is thre gonna be a part 2?(Yes plez)

oh wow totally awesome story loved every bit of it and oh the ichihime goodness_

That was a good story. Great Job!-

so um aren't u planning to do a seqel cause i love this story if u do a sequel i'll gave u 10 reviews

This is quite interesting and I love Orihime x Ichigo. I hope they get together in the manga too. But they probably won't(

Next chap!next chap!pleeasee!

Loved your story!

Ichihime is my favourite Bleach pairing.

The story is really addictive! I couldn't stop reading it until it ended! xD

Keep up the fantastic work!

I'll be waiting for more!

That was great. And a little scared.

REALLY GOOD!.

Dude this story freaked me out big time, and I had and urge to go punch Ichigo for not checking on Orihime sooner. But he did do all that good stuff at the end so he safe, for now. MUAHAHAHAA! How could you do that My Toy' thing at the end, so evil ha ha.

If you made a sequal or something, that'd be awesome and creepy! Good story even if you don't update

cool I liked it, and i have a feeling your thinking about a second

Wow, to be honest at first when i read ur summary I thought, "this is the most ridiculous thing i've ever heard" and skipped it but then i saw a link to it on another website and i was like "what the heck i'll give it a try." and all i can say is wow! u r an amazing writer! it was soo scary! it's 1am and i'm home alone and i dont think i shall be sleeping anytime soon! i really loved the ichihimeness but it wasnt enough to cancel out the creepy feeling. now i shall go hide under my covers!

awesome story!

it was nice! I love Ichihime pairing! I really hope they get together!