NO! You can't stop there!1
I plead unashamed at your feet.
Please, Please write more!
This story is fantastic, and I can't wait to see what happens...

hurray this is a great story!! i cant wait to see what happens next, and i hope u decide to continue it!

Whoa, what a start! I wonder where this is leading... and if Marik really kills him in the end. Er, I don't know your standard gore writing, but I think the way it is right now is good style for the story. Don't overdo it ;)Good work, well done! Especially the crazy hint in Marik... *shudder*

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I really like this fanfiction and I am looking forward to read the next chapters very much.

awesome!
update soon, okay?!

I am loving this story so far. Please update soon, I must know what happens to little ryou.

please upload more :D

No, the cliffhanger of doom! Amazing fic so far, please up-date again sometime ^-^

i love your story it`s relly good I would like to hear if you are going to write more.

aura.

no! not a cliff hanger! i love this story by the way. It's very well written! update soon please! cliffhangers drive me crazy 0_o

i relly enjoy this storie

wow, I really like your story! =D
It got me hooked! I got mad that it left in a cliff hanger (it just shows its a great story)
please continue =) keep up the good work!

AGH! Ryou! What are you thinking! *flails*

i love this write more

It's been a while since I came across something that made my heart race. Does the fact that I like this sort of thing make me a bad person? Herm.