Great start I hope you update soon

This is really good! I'd like to read more.

that was good

O.O The sequel! Hahas, I love how Ryou decided that Bakura wasn't a threat anymore... -Smirks-
Shiroi(:

I love the sequel and especially in Ryou's point of view.

Hi i just finished reading this and its awesome!!
so glad u decided to do a sequel and from Ryou and Bakura's perspective too yay
coz we didnt see much of them in the first story :D
love how u've started this off
cant wait to see wats gonna appen next
hope u update soon!! XD

Swet! The sequel! I am too a bit fan of Bakura and Ryou, so it will be nice to read it.

And for what I read, Ryou seems stressed because of the mating show, but with some help, it will be gone ^.^

Great beggining! *thumbs up*

i really like it! please update as soon as you can! *hands you a cookie*

Sweet the squeal! I can't wait to read more!

This was interesting to read. I rather liked the original, and I'm always a fan of BakuraxRyou fluff/smut/rawr. (Yes, rawr.)

Anyway, the only thing I found confusing was how the perspectives would change. It kept shifting from first to third which was a bit... cunfuzzling.

Well I look forward to the second chapter and where you plan on taking it! I rather enjoyed the first chapter, and I'm certain the second one will be enthralling.

P.S:

Darth. I want a green balloon :D

yaya am so happy that there is A SEQUEL cant wait for it

Sounds interesting!