I've finally gotten the chance to just sit and read the rest of this. Very good, makes a good opener for Manaan, if you do intend to go on with this (I hope you do). But the best part was Kono realizing he's not invincible. He has faults. You've really pieced together his character well throughout Den of Hate and Forest of Lies, but this really added the final, missing touch. =D

Woo! More Kono!

I'm excited to see your take on the Leviathan, and how Kono can escape while suffering a VERY bad migrane! =)

Good job.

Canderous and Killer should not be in the same paragraph.

Really good Revan you have in this story and the fight was awesome. Ouch! All those injuries--poor Bastila and Kono. using the sword of Ajunta Pall was a stroke of genuis and very original. Looking forward to more.

Good job.

Not bad.

Great chapter. The scene with the Kel-sath made me slightly queasy; they are grusome, but interesting additions to the SW universe. I hope you update again soon.

Good job.

Good job.

Good job.