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Reviews for: Promised
Flying Chrissy
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
A very interesting story!
looking forward o he next update.
cyiusblack
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
update soon
Arbitrary Doom
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
...i like it thus far...please continue...
suki53
2008-12-15 . chapter 2
Very interesting plot. I like the gypsy culture so I'm very intrigued.
keikochan100
2008-12-14 . chapter 2
Great story!! I love it so far, i can't wait til the next chapter!
dairygirl
2008-12-14 . chapter 2
This is a nice start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to more.

Note: the last line of this chapter should read "No, nothing too bad, I think." rather than "No, nothing to bad, I think."
amy
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
Oh I like it so far! I am a little confused, but I am sure things will become clearer the more you write. Also if you can, try making the chapters longer, most of the time I don't even bother trying stories if they do no have at least 1,0 words per chapter. I think yours is one of like 4 that I have started reading with less. But usually the better stories have at least slightly longer chapters. Other than that it was really good! Hope you update again soon!
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