 Flying Chrissy 2009-06-16 . chapter 3A very interesting story!
looking forward o he next update. |
 cyiusblack 2009-06-16 . chapter 3update soon |
 Arbitrary Doom 2009-06-16 . chapter 3...i like it thus far...please continue... |
 suki53 2008-12-15 . chapter 2Very interesting plot. I like the gypsy culture so I'm very intrigued. |
 keikochan100 2008-12-14 . chapter 2Great story!! I love it so far, i can't wait til the next chapter! |
 dairygirl 2008-12-14 . chapter 2This is a nice start to a story. I am intrigued and look forward to more.
Note: the last line of this chapter should read "No, nothing too bad, I think." rather than "No, nothing to bad, I think." |
 amy 2008-11-03 . chapter 1 Oh I like it so far! I am a little confused, but I am sure things will become clearer the more you write. Also if you can, try making the chapters longer, most of the time I don't even bother trying stories if they do no have at least 1,0 words per chapter. I think yours is one of like 4 that I have started reading with less. But usually the better stories have at least slightly longer chapters. Other than that it was really good! Hope you update again soon! |