Think a wedding smut would come in handy... just wishfull thinking :) As always, great chapter!

ACK really? :( you're leaving us hanging here? pouts fine... : I hope we don't have to wait too long for another update on our favorite rancher and his to be "in laws". Must have more to complete my perfect weekend! :) hee hee... do I have to get on my knees n beg? :D btw, evil hat... hi there! are you gracing us with your presence? :)

Keep the hat locked away lol . Let Grissom heal at least. seriouslt though am loving this story and can't wait for more.

Oh hat, he has to make it. Hasn't everyone suffered enough? The one who deserved to die is dead so don't throw any innocent ones in the mix, hmm? Great chapter. Shows how truly exhausted everyone is from this horrible ordeal.

Wow! not alot changed in this update and yet it feels as though the entire world has stopped turning..

Gil has got to survive.. Sara needs him.. The Wedding needs to take place ASAP.. I still think Gil should pack Sara up and move her away from here.. Go back to his place,

Laura needs to be cleared and McKeen needs to be forgotten..

evil hat - stay grumpy.. we all need a little GSR and perhaps soon some real GSR smut...

Back, back, evil Hat! You have done enough damage here, begone!

:) So thrilled to see a new chapter, but poor Gil and Sara ... need to get 'em healthy and happy again, we need more "Best of times" doncha think?

A beautiful update, despite the dire circumstances. The interaction between the Captain and Laura, Sara's utter exhaustion yet her inability to be away from Grissom, Rana's dedication and the boys somber loyalty...all of it just added so much to this chapter. Well worth the wait, and hat's being disgruntled, LOL. BTW, I wholly support your thought that GSR needs a little...er, ALOT of smut right now. We have really been deprived. Perhaps a dream for Sara in between the team trying to find Gris and rescue him from Mr. B. ?

Yeah new chapter. You sure know how to keep up the suspence. I'll take a turn watching Grissom if you need me. Great work.

Gosh, poor Griss and Sara... but I agree Laura Griss will fight, the last monster is already gone and their future will hold just good things from now... right?

oooh! Poor Sara and Gil. aw!

ew! Mckeen...that room should be burned with crispiness! Yes, I know I like crispying bad people. LOL.

Oh evil hat who took you off the shelf, tisk tisk tisk. I first want to say OMG! okay now that thats out of the way, great update, I have tears streaming down my face and I find myself wanting to put these two on my prayer list. GREAT, looking forward to the healing and eventual happiness that I know these two deserve! Hopefully that is coming soon, PLEASE!

This was an incredibly intense chapter and you wrote it beautifully. The pain and fear were palpable. When Grissom was begging the Captain to hit him...ughhh, so intense. Sara's fear and feeling helpless...all of it. Wonderful, though it almost killed me to read (figuritively of course, LOL) Can't wait for more.

Evil hat turn slightly less evil and lets him live, hmmm? Yes! Fantastic chapter. Extremely intense and heartbreaking. I'm not even gonna try to imagine what Grissom went through. I don't know how he survived the bullet removal. Thank The Lord for David...now onto recovery :)

He will survive. You may torture him, shoot him, even disfigure him, but you will not kill him. If that were to happen the hat would have to be burned at the stake. More soon please,
Carol