Good work

Good work

Wow, I like how this chapter turned out.

Threatening to drop beds on people sounds fun.

This story is pretty damn funny, good work.

I've been really enjoying this ever since I saw it recommended on TVTropes.

Shinji's madness look to be a new interesting development, as does Illya's interactions with Caster.

This hasn't been updated in a while, but I'll be eagerly waiting, just hoping to see some more. I love Rin as an antagonist. Wish there was more of that in canon.

Hm I like where this is going

"You presume correctly, Lancer."

"I see." Lancer had to admit, this was a lucky break. Two Servants in one night. He was now much closer to finishing this inane scouting mission. And if his "test" against Caster, a class ill-suited to physical combat, went too far... well, who could blame him? "Well then, now that introductions are finished..." Lancer attacked, his lance becoming a point of red.

...in an instant Caster moved, a sword appearing in her hand. She deflected his attack.

"..." Lancer lowered his lance. "Oh God Damn it! You use a sword too? For the love of... why the hell aren't you and Archer Saber!?"

"...you sound offended." Caster commented.

"Of course I am! I'm Lancer." He held up his weapon, "Note the fact that I use a Lance." He spun it around and pointed it at Archer's throat. He had been sneaking up on them. "And I know you're behind me Bow-boy." He cleared his throat, "Anyways! The point is this, I am a Lancer. Therefore, my Noble Phantasm, the tool which defines me as a Hero, is a lance. You don't see me prancing around with, I don't know..."

"A bow?" Caster suggested helpfully.

"Yeah! Because I'm Lancer. You two are doing it wrong. Seriously. Archer, you fight with bows. Caster, you mainly blast shit with magic. That's how it works! Neither of you use fucking swords!"

ROFLAMO

I love this fic, between you and COMegamanexe I'm getting my fix of super-cool caster action! Don't stop just because your story was plageerised, Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery and I like BOTH of your takes on this! Keep it up PLEASE! Or I'll come and Nom your head off..

YES! One of my favorite Fate/stay night fanfic concepts has been brought to life: that of Counter Guardian Tohsaka after a bad UBW ending.

I must say you're a blessing to that fantasy I've had of this scenario; I thank you for your wonderful work on this fanfic so far.

Please update soon, I'm really excited for this. :D

Goddammit I have to say... you are a genius. this was important to me when I found it for two reasons; the seconed is that it's absolutely fantastic; the first is not to be disclosed to anyone.

Skar out (don't ask)

-Yes I do like things other than Zelda-

Just want to tell you that I find this a very interesting story. I'm glad to see writers in general working on FSN FFs again! While the characters seem a little OoC on occasion (eating pizza?) it's done very well and adds to the good flow of the story. I personally can't wait for the next enstallment.

P.S. I hope Sakura ends up with Shiro. I always wanted her to get some justice after how messed up the Heaven's Feel arc was =)

Good character development for Illya, Shinji is clearly losing it.
Overall an admirable chapter.

nice chapter. I like the interaction between Illya and Caster as well, though she might have been able to guess who Caster was if she knew that Archer acts like the manipulative person.
And nice foreshadow to the identity of Archer in the dialogue with Saber, Shirou, Rider, and Sakura.

Keep it up!

keep up the interesting work, very well written and quite the enjoyable chapter.