|Reviews for The Good, the Bad and the Ugly|
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 10
Awwww, what sweet ending X3
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 9
"and other words he has to secretly check in the dictionary"
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 8
Bumping heads! Haha! I can totally picture that happening!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 7
Daniel. You idiot. You should've just kissed her right there and then.
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 4
"Oh no, he's not gorgeous. I mean, he is. I mean, not that he isn't, because come on – but no, he's a man."
LMAO! You're simply awesome at writing Betty!
| Mrs-N-Uzumaki 3/10/13 . chapter 1
"...We're transitioning, Daniel! From boss and assistant. Isn't that cool?"
That is SO like Betty to say :D
| lil smiles 11/24/11 . chapter 10
Yes, I am well aware that I'm extremely late to the party. I suppose the saying "better late than never" could apply but I'm here and I'm so glad to be here!
Okay, here's the quote that got me hooked on this whirlwind fluff-fest (which incidentally is only good to read when the writing is on point, and boy was it ever in this fic).
[The glass is as transparent and flimsy as reality, because if he has anything to tell her she'll know anyway and come rushing in; if she wants to tell him something he somehow knows, is able to straighten and brace for the shock of hurricane Betty on her latest quest to make the world a better place seconds before it decides to arrive in a flurry of kaleidoscopic colour.]
That sentence is just perfection. Absolutely beautiful.
Love your take on the relationship between Daniel and Betty and how you transitioned them from friends to lovers. Your touches of humor were the icing on the cake! Ugh, so good. I really don't have enough words.
| beulah2013 7/12/11 . chapter 10
I just wanted to say awe! This last chapter was sooo sweet!
| Sam L 1/16/11 . chapter 10
Oh my gosh, that was so cute and fluffy it brought a tear to my eyes. I hope you keep writing Detty fiction as this was awesome.
| Owl Emporium 8/20/10 . chapter 10
Awww, this was way too sweet. (: Great job! I loved this.
| Witchy-grrl 4/21/10 . chapter 10
OH MY SHIPPER HEART JUST EXPLODED IN GLEE WITH THIS ENDING. LOLOLOL it sounds disgusting, but it's true. :P
I LOVE AND ADORE your Daniel!POV. It's self-deprecating and hilarious and confused and SO exactly how I'd imagine it. And his reactions? SPOT ON. OF COURSE he'd react like a giant douche with these revelations, and OF COURSE he'd manage to fix it in hi bumbling and adorable way. LOVE LOVE LOVE everything about this story! ::FAVS::
| The Wigmeister 4/13/10 . chapter 10
I have recently read a lot of Detty fics and this is my utter favourite. Simply because I think it's the one most believable. Plus, Daniel's an adorable idiot lol! I laughed a LOT throughout this and I love to laugh so thank you so much for this.
| meemalee 10/12/09 . chapter 10
Where to begin? Probably the best Detty fic I've ever read. You capture both their voices so beautifully - their quirks and insecurities, Daniel's arrogance and dorkiness, Betty's liveliness. I love how you wrote Daniel's epiphany and how betty thought something else had dawned on him, and though it broke my heart I loved how Daniel failed to immediately tell Betty he loved her too, because Daniel is a bit of a coward and this is how he'd truthfully react.
If this is how Detty occurs onscreen then I would be the happiest of fans.
| Gift 3/13/09 . chapter 10
This was fluffy in all the right places
| PPBJ 3/4/09 . chapter 10
Wonderful story! Great, great writing.