Okay! You've change, somewhat, my mind about Harry. I'm still dubious about him, but I see that he can be Mr. Sensitive, if only in some ways. I'm glad he and Bradin are getting along. I wonder if Nikki is ever going to tell anyone about her "feelings"... 'cause that will be a weird story to tell.

I like how "Pretty Boy" and Fran's relationship has developed. There's some tension. LOL! Bradin trying to get her in bed is one of the most hilarious things I've ever read. I couldn't stop laughing! =D

However, is Fran ever going to find out what really happened to Frank? The whole Arkansas River incident was just too scary. I thought something really bad was going to happen! UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

aw missed this so much!!keep it up!

Yay! You updated! :)

I LOVED this chapter! It was SO good! Poor Bradin, I was worried that he was going to drown or something! I really liked that scene, very suspensful!

Harry does seem like he's getting better, I loved the whole ice fishing part, that was really cool!

I can't wait until you update next!

Acciodanrad9

really great job. I can't wait to see whats gonna happen next

I still think that Harry Carver is total piece of **! He bruised Bradin and his excuse was alcohol? Was he listening to Jamie Fox's song "Blame it on the booze... blame it on the alcohol..." A chick making him drink, and the drink making him hit is as logical as using a car without gas to get to Jupiter! He's so infuriating. I like the sibling telepathy between Bradin and Nikki! She felt the slap Bradin felt. She knows something is up!

Okay, Fran had a ** night! Why did her brother ODed? Did he really meant the whole "put a hole in my head" thing? Her rant as weird and bitchy as it was, was hilarious! I laughed at the sex partner thing! LOL! I'm glad Bradin is opening up to Fran. She seems to be really nice. I like how she gave an original "I'm sorry!" Ooh! I wonder what's going to happen next? Will Harry catch them? UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

PS: Remember slow, painful, lonely, worst-case scenery death to Harry (LOL!)... unless he suddenly changes... here's to hoping!

I really liked this chapter. My favorite part was when Bradin finally told Fran about his parents. I can't wait for you to update. This story is great! :)

acciodanrad9

Glad Bradin's making some friends! I wonder if Frank and him will become a couple? Harry...Bradin's living situation does not look good... :( Great chapter! :)

Oh no. Poor Bradin. I feel really bad for him...since he has to go live with that jerk! This was a great chapter! I am hooked!

I am so behind! I had no idea there were more chapters to this story! It's great so far...and I'm really wondering if Harry is actually Bradin's father. Nevertheless, I don't think he's going to be that nice to Bradin. :( Great chapter! :)

wow i liked it!...Keep it up!:):):)

Is Harry for real?! He's an **! Who the hel shove up a stick up his? Seriously, that guy can be told anything bad because he snaps! Jeez! He wanted to be part of Bradin's life?! Yeah, right! Even, I can see through that piece of human work. (LOL!)

I love how Mike makes introductions. Those are so heart-warming! Poor Bradin, he struggling! What does Mike do down there?! Fran is awesome! I really hate bad drivers too...

Harry is pathetic excuse for a human being. Did he really expect Bradin to wait for him for hours because Harry "Father of the Year" Carver needed to get his alcohol fix?! Ugh. Just kill off...painfully...please! UPDATE SOON!

~KARLA

Hey! You're back! Funny thing is I was reading a different story, came to the main page, and tada! There's your story updated. Man, it has been awhile since I read your work:) I like your new characters, and Harry's a jerk. Pretty sure you should get rid of him:) But I know you won't...not yet anyways. Also, we must like the same character names or something...Good job on the story so far, and update soon!

ohh wwow..sad!!but more please?!

um...please finish this?!?!?!so good and i realyy wanna know what happens?!?!?!!?10stars~!

No way! He can't have custody over Bradin. Not fair! Update soon! I want to see what Bradin's going to do.

BTW: Thanks for the shout-out!

~KARLA