 twotoe 11/3/08 . chapter 1Really interesting take on Sam and Ruby and how the time passed. You can see the really nice progression of how things might have happened and to how we ended up where we did when we meet them together again in the season opener. The one thing I REALLY wish you had chosen to write was the rest. The two of them working together and the powers I suppose too, but I mean especially Ruby opening that door to Bobby and...Dean. What she thought, felt. Maybe even to her wondering what the heck had happened because there was no demon powerful enough to have brought him back, that big cosmic thing she wonders and worries about. The story up to where she hears it was angels. And her thoughts on THAT. Dean was always special, but now he is a big fish and the Ruby you've written, despite being terrified of the angels would have to have some thoughts on that. But if nothing else, her thoughts at the door and as Dean and Sam hug is what I would have really loved to see. I think you would do a good job of it and I hope you maybe consider it. I'm going to put this story on my alert list just in case. Really nice and interesting characterization of Ruby that I haven't actually seen done quite this way before. |
 Tears of Trees 11/3/08 . chapter 1Aw that was sweet I always liked Ruby, and you just showed her in like a really nice light, and I think, caught Sam nicely on how he would be after his brother died Always Ruby and her fries, with ketchup) |