Aw, that's so sweet. I hope Sora didn't say that last line out loud, because that would be embarrasing ... And also speed up some SoRiku *eyes shimmer in delight* XD

Okay, ima read the next chapter soon!

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraXRiku

Okay. I think ima read more. Consider me something of a fan, now =D Yay for me?

Heh.

Maybe this plot'll flesh out a bit more, now that i'm into the third chapter (or just about to be). And maybe the chapters will get a bit longer.

*Hopes*

Well, see you later!

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraXRiku

I'm a dreamer, too. I'm dreaming for Sora and Riku to be togehter. Uh-huh. XD

I like that last sentecnce, because you can look a tit in many, many ways, and get so many different meanings out of it. Way to go! =D

I'll see how i lke the next chapter, then decide whether or not i like this fic. Caus i'm indecisive, that way (actually that totally isn't true. Hahaha)

Look forward to another reply from me!

Yeps.

Regards,
Keuraki-SoraXRiku

Man, I love your stories. The Seiner in this... it was awesome cause it was Seiner, but I actually did not expect it with how much of a tool Seif was being.
The Sora and Riku moments were so sugary sweet that my teeth rotted! (That's a good thing, don't worry.) Fluff makes the world go round.
Can't believe he went out in that storm for the paopu, man! Poor guy... amazingly cute... but DUDE. Don't try to kill yourself for a fruit XD even if it was a symbol of your growing relationship with Sora during the entire story!
I really liked this fic though... I think it might be one of my favourites of yours so far that I've read.
Keep up the good work! You're awesome! As you probably know I think by now seeing as how I've been reading all your stuff lately... Yes... Anyways...
That's it.
Thanks for the awesome fic!
-Axel's Roxas

"...constantly vigilant about their punctilious eloquence rather than the message their words were conveying."
Dude. Hypocritical much?

The writing's cool, the story's cute, but the vocabulary? It sounds like you had your thesaurus on hand the whole time and some phrasings just sound SO awkward! While I'm happy that your writing is intelligent, there's NO need to use that much complicated vocabulary just to sound smart. It distracts from the story.

Other than that, cute stuff. :3

aw that was sweet ending. they really are going to be together forever.

I love it! Awesome job! I love Sora-Riku!

share another story?
IN THE NEXT LIFE?? *grin grin*
oh good ending... kinda random of Riku to just RUSH out in the middle of a storm for the poapu fruit... i suppose he did it because he was afraid the storm would destroy it?

ah, love :P

So good! Btw- awesome imagery.

Wah! It's over. I liked it though.

yay their ok! woop!

WWOHO! I WAS MENTIONED! Thanks! THIS WAS A TERRIFIC LAST CHAPTER! So sad it has to end but i LOVED it:D I knew RIku was going to go get the fruit even before you put up this chapter! Cant wait for more of your work! Congrats to the end of a magnificent story!

B'daw. That was...really sweet. Reading all that in one day, I can definitely see how your writing style developed, too, which was pretty awesome.

I have to admit that the blue paopu fruit thing did kinda freak me out. I know it wasn't supposed to, but when you half-convinced me Riku was gonna get impaled on a tree branch or come home with his leg gnawed off or something I kept thinking about that Anatole France quotation. "To die for an idea is to set a rather high price on conjecture."

"Je suis ennuyer."

FALSE!

HaHA, long-ago Pez! It's a reflexive verb, not an adjective! "Je m'ennui," lady!

...I bet you totally knew that.

-sigh-

MORE READING!

Aw... I especially love the epilogue; the idea of the painting is lovely. Man, now I want a copy of that picture... Hmm... Next kiriban I grab, I'll have to ask for that XDXDXDXD.