BRILLIANT!

Awsome!! Write more!

that was amazing!

This is so cute. I love Kartik. I was so sad at the end of T.S.F.T. You are a very good writer. It's nice to read a fanfiction thats been well written and edited.

Awesome job!
Love your style, you did really well with imagery, especially the "evening pregnant with the promise of thundershower" part.
And you have Kartik down to pat! He was so much in character.

Looking foward to other Gemma and Kartik works by you!!

That is really lovely! Please write more, you have a nice voice, it's not quite Libba Bray's but you definitely have the characters! Very very nice.

Aw, that was cute. I was a bit confuzzled on the crow part but it was very good. =D

aww! i just finished this series! i've thought about doing a Gemma and Kartik fanfic, but i've mostly stuck with Twilight. Good work! i'm quite a sucker for a good romance! :)

love it! =]