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Reviews for: First Sorrow
Clodia
2009-05-25 . chapter 1
Lovely. The narrator's second person address is suitably epic and works very well. Thanks!
Calenlass Greenleaf1
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Poignant, and more so when you used 2nd person POV.

~Cal
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