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Snowball's Chance In
2009-03-17 . chapter 3
Signed up just for you. Let's get started.

Same complaints as usual; Kratos is OOC. If the group flew all the way out to Flanoir, they must have a good reason for being there. I doubt that Kratos, as serious as he is, would sidetrack them with a surprise snowball fight like that, even if it were for training. If anything, he'd wait until they were settled at the inn and then wake them up in the middle of the night and drag them outside. Using a snowball fight as training seems like a bad idea as well, seeing as the exercise was meant to improve their aim with projectiles and the only people who use projectile weapons are Colette and Sheena. (I'm being generous with Sheena as I'm feeling lazy and really don't want to go check if she throws those cards or just waves them around.)

Feel free to PM me, if you have legitimate reasons for writing this way then I'd love to hear them. (I apologize if I offended you by not reviewing "Wings of Despair", but personally, I never leave reviews that are praise and nothing but. After I cited it as a work of yours that I like, I feel as though a critical review from me may make you think something I never intended. Nevertheless, I still stand by my opinion that you shouldn't be wasting your time on these drabbles when you have the talent to be writing the next "Grandkid".)
accident prone
2009-03-07 . chapter 3
MAN, KRATOS IS such an old man. training, indeed...heh. loved it, though!
Cataclysmic Eclipse
2009-01-12 . chapter 2
Well that was amusing. =D
Cataclysmic Eclipse
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
First review! Whoot! You already know I love this fic. And I could give you some concrit however since I already looked it over...I can say it's awesome. : D Hope to see some more to come. Make them awesome, I know you can.
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