This story is well-writtened! ^^ But there's one that's bothering me, isn't Lloyd's exsphere blue?

Oh very nice. Shall have to go back and re-read that part in FotP now. As usual, excellent writing and I love the way you portray the characters.

ah. I never noticed Dark Secrets before. I wonder why -sweatdrop- Bad Bucky.

its a sweet little oneshot. I love how Luke punched Lloyd for once. ANd "I'm sick of your whinny crap." Does that have anything to do with Zelos?

Bucky.

The first paragrah is kidan convolted but I liked the rest of the fic.
Talkinh about the natural elements by their Abyss names..nice personification. ANd the description of Lloyd's feelings about the Vorpal Sword.

Favorite aprt though ist he 'in someoen's shadow.. A replica and a non, but still in someoens' shadow. Nice common ground

...Really beautiful! But to 'no more secret' is kinda off to Lloyd isn't it? since almost his whole story is made of lies~ And I would just love to see when he revealed to them who his father is! And probably somehow help Kratos regain his memories?

Whoa! That was...unexpected. I didn't thinkk that Lloyd would hit him, much less Luke return the punch. It's just...wow. Really emotional, too. You did an amazing job on it! Loved it, of course! Sometimes, genres other than humor can hit a deeper note. Update soon!

This is great! I really like how you portrayed Lloyd's feelings upon finding out about Luke being Asch's replica. I also like how they how they reconciled their differences and by talking about how similar they are. I can't wait to read more! Good luck!

~ GoldenTalesGeek