|Reviews for Above and Beyond|
| raining ripples 7/11/10 . chapter 2
althought it's a bit rushed, i like the storyline. (:
And since I also live in Australia, just a little f.y.i, 'high school' in Japan is split into two, 3 years in junior high and 3 in Senior.
Also the random Japanese in the dialogue was a bit annoying, when Hinata introduces herself ''blabla- watashi wa -''
Yea, just some constructive criticism. (:
| Maskedgirl3 7/8/10 . chapter 2
interesting! I like the way you use sai in this cause he looks like sasuke...clever...lol but just favorited and subscribed to story alert! can't wait for next chapter! _ EXCITED
| amethyst-dreams27 4/8/09 . chapter 2
Nice story! I liked the 1st chapter, it was great and descriptive. But in some places the 2nd chapter was kinda lagging. Instead of writing down everyone's interests and personalities in one paragraph try and show it by the way you write without telling us. Like the way you showed Naruto's hyperactive personality- that was excellent!
Great story, looking fwd to the next chapter!
| mybloodyday 3/11/09 . chapter 2
| Melodicxstar 1/7/09 . chapter 2
Niice Ali D keep writing and happy hols
| MidnightSaphire 1/6/09 . chapter 2
aw that's so cute! plz update :)
| x.X.x.X.xBabyboo294x.X.x.X.x 1/5/09 . chapter 2
Those fangirls are beasts!lol!please ocnintue!
| honeycomb198 1/5/09 . chapter 2
o i like this story!
| Mindy 12/1/08 . chapter 1
Yes please continue! I want to know what happens!
| ele 11/30/08 . chapter 1
continue pls :D
| 101bubbly 11/24/08 . chapter 1
please continue!im hooked and will definately read the rest!
thnx so much!finally sakura falls in love w/ some1 other than
sasuke!hes still a butwhole tho!seems shes always gonna b
write a happy ending and ill love u 4ever!
| OVER-bridges 11/19/08 . chapter 1
Yes, definitely continue. I love your two stories. Please continue both.
| Paralysistracks 11/14/08 . chapter 1
MEP! CONTINUE! Lol - Corpse Bride :D
| frienz4ever 11/9/08 . chapter 1
i love the whole starting over thing haha
| IceRose 11/9/08 . chapter 1
Continue its a grat story