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Myurra-K. Velveteen Deceptions
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
AHH!

Sorry Sashi! I read this ages ago, I would have reviewed it if i knew it was you who wrote it O_o (shows how much I pay attention, LOL) I see ry0kiku found it before me, she said something about it...

Anywho, I really love this, it's so detailed on the small little scene. It was written well and flows beautifully, i can completely imagine Hakkai teaching Goku something like that.

It's nice reading some of your *ahem* less detailed *ahem* fics if you know what i mean ^^. I have tonnes of fics that are just single little pairing-less scenes that i really should upload but cant be bothered to. LOL

~MK
hamiechi
2009-01-04 . chapter 1
Tough i love its idea,but it's too flat~.keep on writing rated K saiyuki ne^^
ry0kiku
2008-11-05 . chapter 1
Wow.
It's amazing how a simple thing like shaving could borne out such a good fic.
Great job!
I like the imagery of Hakkai helping Goku in front of the mirror ^.^
Ditch Gospel
2008-11-04 . chapter 1
Aw, what a cute, quiet moment. It's always nice to get a glimpse at the ikkou off-duty, isn't it? I enjoyed Hakkai in this, gentle and helpful but with a scary edge. Er, no pun intended. ;) Goku's thoughts when he passed Gojyo and Sanzo were good, very appropriate in each case.

I just can't picture Goku with a beard! I suppose it sounds silly, but in my brain, pretty anime boys don't have facial hair. *grin*

I really like your stories!
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