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Tikal Tyrant
2009-05-26 . chapter 27
That is a wierd word. That you for introducing it to me. Oh no. I hope that dream didn't mean Tweek and Craig were breaking up. :( I liked the ironic end though.
Tikal Tyrant
2009-05-26 . chapter 26
How sweet. Wait, no it wasn't. That was sad. :( Good one though. :)
Mizuni-no-neko
2009-05-25 . chapter 26
Aww that makes me sad!

1. Stendy and K/K make my soul die lol
2. They BELONG together! xD
Kanki Youji
2009-05-23 . chapter 24
Haha. You got into it because Kenny is on the list of 'most pairable South Park Characters EVER' (Along with Kyle, Tweek, and Craig). Poor boy deserves all the arse he can get, after all.
Kanki Youji
2009-05-23 . chapter 20
Aw! Poor Kenny! *snuggles the fluffy*

Very... sad. But cute.
Kanki Youji
2009-05-23 . chapter 19
For some reason I feel Craig would go for Cockney for his accent...

Which I can really kinda picture now. It's a strange mental image (Craig walkings around with a cockney accent, and Tweek's on his arm in a petticoat with a sun-umbrella/parasol, don't ask me why) but it's quite entertaining. Thank you.
Mizuni-no-neko
2009-05-09 . chapter 22
Update?
Cookie?
Walrus?

lol seriously, though update!!
Mizuni-no-neko
2009-05-09 . chapter 2
Dide! I can barely pronounce that word! xD
Tikal Tyrant
2009-03-10 . chapter 25
Hehe. Oh Craig and his naughty thoughts. So cute!
This account does not exist
2009-03-09 . chapter 1
Good drabbles there.

Don't listen to 3ninjafan, it's just a bunch of words for him to say.
3ninjafan
2009-03-07 . chapter 1
How serendipitous for you that I happened upon your story! You are about to receive one of my more creative flames, written from the copious amount of words which people suggested for my flame-writing challenge. After all, one can only use a copy-paste flame for so long before it becomes trite, right?

Right.

Now, before I crack my knuckles and begin, I certainly hope you don’t suffer from katagelophobia as I’m about to flame this disastrous fiasco you call a story, or from triskaidekaphobia as this sentence will end with the number 13.

I wish I could tell you that you didn’t have superfluous spelling errors or that your loathsome grammar didn’t make me cringe. I wish I could tell you that your plot wasn’t turbid and your characters banal. And I also wish I could work the word antidisestablishmentarianism into this flame….but, alas, I can’t do any of those things.

Now, perhaps there is an excuse for you posting this irredeemable excrement. Maybe you were drunk on a few strawberry daiquiris, or maybe you were even attacked by a bevy of flailing birds when you were younger, thus causing a permanent writing-related affliction. Or perhaps your computer was hijacked by a crank-addicted Sasquatch or a monkey whose loose sphincter and love of broccoli causes an aeruginous effluvium wherever he goes.

Whatever the excuse, it doesn’t make your story inscrutable to honest feedback like this:

I would rather attend a hoedown where inbred midgets caterwaul and perform fouettes while some guy named Jed plays the piano with an unmentionable body part than read any more of this pitiful abomination you call a story. I would rather be forced to participate in the domestication of rabid chupacabras than read one more sentence of your crap. I would even rather have an internship with Microsoft where I have to juxtapose logarithms for no reason and answer questions in pig-Latin about misconfigurations or network error messages all day.

I wish I could have faith that you will have an epiphany from this and produce a copasetic story, or that you’ll become obsequious to the fundamentals of the English language, but I think my left testicle will become a famous daredevil who competes in monster truck races before that happens. In other words: as a writer, you fail.

Best regards,
Pillar Of Winter
Tikal Tyrant
2009-03-06 . chapter 24
Wow. I just read all these drabbles. These are all really good! I love how you mix up all the couples so everyone has a favorite in here! I really look forward to reading more!
naonaonao
2009-02-25 . chapter 18
These are SO cute! I approve of every single pairing you've included, and you really have a way with words. You're blunt but descriptive, and your characterization is flawless. Funny, too -- just like the show. Keep these up, I really enjoy them. Perfect length and whatnot.
omg.u.killed.kenny
2008-11-17 . chapter 16
AY! WE"RE NOT ALL ANNOYING!

lol nice story
PimpedOutGreenEars
2008-11-09 . chapter 11
It would be really helpful if you told the deffinition of the words you're using.
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