really great work!

Love this story. No matter how many times I read it, I love it more every time

Very sexy discriptions. max is certainly a girl in need of an awakening. ginger

yeah just open your eyes
maria

Got one word for ya: Awesome :D

OMGosh!! I LOVED this! It was so perfect. I love how you wrote the epiphany, how you took us through the steps of change (though you didn't detail them all that much, it did seem to be enough). It was well-written and each emotion seemed a logical step. I loved that she said she loved him and he responded. It felt so real, so right, and so permanent. Without a doubt, the best line was the last one "Nothing's changed, Maxie (and she didn't tell him not to call her that). You just opened your eyes." How perfect was that. Absolutely great fic.

Sexy.

And obviously, I like the touch of cockiness and playfulness that is Alec at the very end.

i am completely in love with this fic. very hot and intimate and intense. and in the end it's just max and alec unchanged but better.

oh, very nice. Definitely want one of those. I liked the flow of emotions in this piece, warm and comforting came across very well. Glad to see you are still writing.
RRaineTerra

Whoa, that was HOTT. I just got out of the shower and that totally made me want to jump back in and take a cold one... Seriously, I think Jessica's been the only girl Jensen's ever had really great on-screen chemistry with, and the same for her with him.

Loved it, great job.

Loved this. I especially loved the last line "Nothing's changed, Maxie. You just opened your eyes." Imagine how great Dark Angel would've been if she, and the writers, had opened their eyes then.

That was great. Sexy, sweet, hot as hell. Guh!

LOL, thanks for posting.

-Ellie

GAH! *flails* Oh man. That was just...OMG...*runs for oxygen tank*

Wow it was hot, and then it got sweet at the end. I love the thought of stubborn Max finally getting some and being happy with Alec...because face it who wouldn't be happy with Alec. Great story.